The bar chart stipulates woman unemployment percentage in different parts of United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014. The mentioned parameters are England, Wales, Scotland, NortherN Ireland.
It has clear from the diagram that the unemployment rate among females are decreasing almost all parts of the UK except Scotland. In England accounted for almost 6.8% bankruptcy among women followed by Scotland (6.1%) and Northern Ireland (5.6%) in 2013. Wales had a decent statistics, where only 5.4% of ladies are unemployed at the same time. Likewise, in 2014 also the same trend continues despite some fluctuations in the rate.
Majority of the areas in the UK managed to reduce their unemployment rate to some percentage, even though some only managed to make slight reduction. Northern Ireland made almost 1% percentage improvement in the employment status of woman from 5.6% to 4.6%. Whereas England and Wales achieved a slight improvement in the figure by 0.3% and 0.5% respectively. On the contrary against all the odds Scotland's bankruptcy rate showed an gradual increase of 0.6%.
In conclusion, almost every parts of the United kingdom managed to achieve some success in improving the life of working women. Scotland's rate may be because of some special conditions prevailing in that area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, may, so, whereas, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29756097561 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78785502377 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.5888023959 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.5 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158737337466 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058024852624 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049724216127 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103322426571 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313652757271 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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