The graph below shows how prices of 'high-tech gadgets' changed over time in Somecountry.
The given graph gives information about the changes of the prices regarding the high-tech devices (Navigation systems and Smart phones) in Somecountry during two years and a half (from the second part of 2004 to the end of 2006). The units are measured in US dollars.
Overall, the both gadgets followed almost the same pattern only about 1000 dollars apart. Specifically, the highest price of both occured in the second half of 2004, while the lowest price was in 2006, where both of them met.
In terms of the Navigation systems, it reached a peak of just below $4000 in 2004 and thereafter declined throughout 2005 with prices considerably more than $3000. At the turn of 2005 there was a moderate rise to almost $3500 but at that point it repeatedly decreased to its final bottom of well under 3000 dollars in the last year of the time span.
On the other hand, the prices of smart phones in the initial year were considerably lower (just above $3000) and then slightly decreased to approximately $2800 in the first half of 2005. During the year there was a negligible increase to almost $3000, but then it dropped again in the first half of 2006 (just above $2500) and remained stable until the end of the year.
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- The maps belowe show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, second, so, then, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3970235735 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9620407062 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.625 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 5.23603664747 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107871240219 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0439343891381 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425505635106 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0682380945175 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409732963097 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.