The linegraph demonstrates the number of visitors coming around a particular Caribbean island over 7 years from 2010 and 2017, units are measured especially in millions.
Overall, the staying of tourists cruise and staying on island increased gradually over the period given, while for total staying rose dramatically by the end of 2017. At start of the period staying on cruise ships was less popular among tourists, which indicated about quarter of million, and following that, staying on islands was more popular that, and it indicated about 800 thousands visitors in 2010.
With regards to the number of staying on cruise ships, it began at around 250 thousands of visitoes in 2010 and it was peaked its high point, about two million tourists, in 2017. Likewise, it can be seen from the linegraph, there is flactuation in the number of people, who preferred to stay on island. And also, it dropped approximately 1 million of tourists in 2016, however, it was increased slightly to 1.5 million in 2012.
On the other hand, visiting of total area was widely preferred and beginning of the year 2010, it was the most popular. It can be seen from the linegraph, there is not gradual decrease or flactuation in it, between 2010 and 2017. Also, it increased rapidly until2017 year. Number of total visitors of Caribbean island reached its a high point, to 3.5 million tourists.
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...s are measured especially in millions. Overall, the staying of tourists cruise ...
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... about 800 thousands visitors in 2010. With regards to the number of staying on...
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...ing on cruise ships, it began at around 250 thousands of visitoes in 2010 and it was peaked its ...
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...eased slightly to 1.5 million in 2012. On the other hand, visiting of total are...
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...al visitors of Caribbean island reached its a high point, to 3.5 million tourists.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, likewise, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94396551724 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61580406106 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9942153582 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.7 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157225868893 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717911959197 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475094714506 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117764580796 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444420628731 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.