The line graph illustrates the population of three various types of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012. Leatherback, Green and Olive Ridley are the types of Turtles. Index of 100 has been defined for population in 1980.
Overall, the number of Leatherback and Green Turtles has got decreased with some fluctuation. The population of Olive Ridley Turtles has increased steadily until 1996 and then it also became fluctuating till 2012. The population index of all species is remained almost constant and fluctuating throughout the period.
The number of Leatherback Turtles has increased to around index 135 till 1996. The it oscillates for between 130 to 140 throughout the period. The population index of all species has increased to over 110 in year 1985 and start fluctuating thereafter till 2012 in between 100 and 115.
In first 4 years, population of Green Turtles has slightly increased and then reduced with the fluctuation and it reached to around 90 index in 2012. The number of Olive Ridely Turtles has increased with rise and fall to over 110 and then droped significantly after that till 60 at the end of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ncreased to around index 135 till 1996. The it oscillates for between 130 to 140 th...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'The' or 'it'?
Suggestion: The; It
...ncreased to around index 135 till 1996. The it oscillates for between 130 to 140 throu...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tween 130 to 140 throughout the period. The population index of all species has inc...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'index' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'indexes', 'indices'.
Suggestion: indexes; indices
...fluctuation and it reached to around 90 index in 2012. The number of Olive Ridely Tur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00526315789 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71265118552 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468421052632 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3520904124 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4545454545 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170710685669 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784010993681 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689380624467 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125319476006 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694709961673 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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