The graph below shows the proportion of the population 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The given pie chart depicts data on the percentage of elderly people in Japan, Sweden and USA over a century, namely between 1940 and 2040.
Overall, it is clear that the proportion of aged population will increase in every country given. However, it is forecast that the percentage of Japan's elderly population will undergo the most dramatic rise.
Initially, just below 10% of the population in USA was 60 and over, as opposed to Sweden, where the figure was at approximately 7%. Between 1940 and 1980, the figures for both countries increased gradually before fluctuating in the following period. In USA the elderly population decreased slightly, and following that it reached a plateau at just under 15%, which is expected to last until 2020. It is predicted that the proportion of elders in Sweden will eventually overtake the one of elders in USA and in 2040 the figures for Sweden and USA will peak at just over 25% and about 24% respectively.
With regard to Japan, in 1940 the elders accounted for 5% of the country's total population. There was a steady decrease until 1960, and following that the proportion remained stable at roughly 3%. After 2020 it is expected that the elderly population in Japan will rocket and it will finally exceed the aging populations of the aforementioned countries. Moreover, in 2040 the percentage will be about 5 times as high as the percentage recorded in 1940.
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'however', 'moreover', 'with regard to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.204460966543 0.268076937826 76% => OK
Verbs: 0.130111524164 0.116061578633 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0520446096654 0.0759168565197 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0669144981413 0.0366838410393 182% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0223048327138 0.0131127313244 170% => OK
Prepositions: 0.171003717472 0.155750635184 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0483271375465 0.0379272487307 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72797494988 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0111524163569 0.0210936926555 53% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0966542750929 0.0948980150116 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0260223048327 0.00437022459523 595% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00743494423792 0.00967000014798 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1410.0 1161.00487805 121% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.9 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9243697479 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73763899035 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344537815126 0.337110787985 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264705882353 0.247514529752 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189075630252 0.171178102325 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.134453781513 0.112407865282 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72797494988 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521008403361 0.546246751206 95% => OK
Word variations: 48.6146403945 49.3433353143 99% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 8.93414634146 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6363636364 23.0094962315 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8015540969 42.9750493124 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.181818182 135.714022679 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 23.0094962315 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.363636363636 0.689975730869 53% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 48.1069518717 47.7609492067 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.93220338983 2.94281807926 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.547107160858 0.418131533498 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127024726464 0.181151798455 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.071321061948 0.0850326197045 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.674959267126 0.706616315825 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.158196911917 0.157042692854 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.281899107252 0.228904883108 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803886845667 0.108899403657 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.372690601572 0.367819155151 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.158400923451 0.0812612215331 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.399941926031 0.316326947829 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886815777296 0.0921553760075 96% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.02926829268 198% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 7.1512195122 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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