The graph shows the consumption of four types of diary products in the USA
The plot illustrates consumption figures of four types of dairy products (cheese, yogurt, low-fat ice cream, and full-fat ice cream) in the USA between 1970 and 2010.
Overall, even though full-fat ice cream had the highest consumption figures at the beginning of the period, it showed a gradual decay after, and was surpassed by cheese consumption. In addition, the yogurt ingestion rate rose and overtook low-fat ice cream figures, which declined by the end of the survey.
In 1970, the full-fat ice cream comprised a little over 10 pounds per person, slightly overtaking cheese’s figures by approximately 5 units. Then, the figures started to show a downward trend with little fluctuations, reaching 8-9 units in 2010. On the other hand, cheese consumption demonstrated a steep growth with a peak of roughly 23 at the end of the period.
The amount of yogurt consumed started a gradual rise from almost none in 1970 to a slightly under 10 pounds per person in 2010. In contrast, low-fat ice cream showed only a little fluctuations around its initial value of 4-5 grams per person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: fluctuation
... low-fat ice cream showed only a little fluctuations around its initial value of 4-5 grams p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, in addition, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03314917127 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75317787308 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585635359116 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1492420363 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.875 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127667693344 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056010854331 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660741402851 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0888967950408 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724305513496 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.