This graph illustrates different number of children playing sport in an English town in the year 2012.
Firstly, the major difference according to gender difference was observed in football, as 60 boys played football while only 20 girls liked to play that game. On the other hand hockey was almost equally unliked by males and females as only 15 and 10 children played it respectively. In badminton and swimming, girls showed more interest than boys(girls:boys 50:40 in badminton and 40:30 was the ratio in swimming).
Again in cycling and tennis number of boys lead the girls as 35 boys showed interest in cycling as compared to 20 girls. While, 50 boys played tennis and the number of girls playing tennis was only 38.
Overall, boys showed more interest in 4 out of 6 games in contrast to girls who were more interested in swimming and badminton. Hockey was never liked much by the students.
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- The graph shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an English town in 2012 84
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'if', 'while', 'in contrast', 'in contrast to', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272189349112 0.268076937826 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.165680473373 0.116061578633 143% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0532544378698 0.0759168565197 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0650887573964 0.0366838410393 177% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00591715976331 0.0131127313244 45% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147928994083 0.155750635184 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0650887573964 0.0379272487307 172% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56845065662 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0236686390533 0.0210936926555 112% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0591715976331 0.0948980150116 62% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00591715976331 0.00967000014798 61% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 903.0 1161.00487805 78% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.9 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86363636364 5.90752243213 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.344155844156 0.337110787985 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227272727273 0.247514529752 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.175324675325 0.171178102325 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0974025974026 0.112407865282 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56845065662 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.546246751206 105% => OK
Word variations: 47.8105315618 49.3433353143 97% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 19.25 23.0094962315 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1711730436 42.9750493124 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.875 135.714022679 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 23.0094962315 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.875 0.689975730869 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 41.9772727273 47.7609492067 88% => OK
Elegance: 2.05 2.94281807926 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.543573614505 0.418131533498 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130601472735 0.181151798455 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.104341396995 0.0850326197045 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.676071230196 0.706616315825 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.193474021317 0.157042692854 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.262698679408 0.228904883108 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159959317325 0.108899403657 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.277188629775 0.367819155151 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.105392738626 0.0812612215331 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.39343896163 0.316326947829 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136697573341 0.0921553760075 148% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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