The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland from 1960 to 1995/
The graph gives information about the number of people who contracted X disease in someland over a period of 35 years from 1960 to 1995.
Overall, it is clear that X disease had been raging for first half of the given period, with the number of infected people who suffered from the disease rising dramatically and reaching a peak in the mid seventies. X prevalence remained the same level, before dropping to zero in 1990.
At the beginning of the period, only a hundred people got X disease and this figure remained relatively constant for 5 years. someland experienced an explosive increase in X prevalence, with figure peaking of 500 cases in 1970. There had been no change with regard to X disease for next 5 years.
For a decade, fortunate event occurred in someland. A significant decrease was done in the number of infected people, with figure dropping to zero by 1990. At this time until the end, X disease disappeared in this area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...iod of 35 years from 1960 to 1995. Overall, it is clear that X disease had ...
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..., before dropping to zero in 1990. At the beginning of the period, only a h...
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Suggestion: Someland
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...ard to X disease for next 5 years. For a decade, fortunate event occurred i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90909090909 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6620069481 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8260737813 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288621940093 0.215688989381 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105327233723 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114465312572 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189077021899 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127288282978 0.0819641961636 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.