The line graph illustrates how many people who will learn three categories of languages, namely English, Spanish and Mandarin over the course of 10 year, starting in 2020.
Overall, it can be obviously seen that the number of students leaning these common languages will see an upward trend over the time frame. Furthermore, Engligh will register the highest figure.
Looking at the details, the quantity of people studying English will stand at 550 million. There will be a sharp increase of 150 million in the number of students leaning this language from 2020 to 2024. This figure will decrease gradually by 100 million students between 2024 and 2025 . After that, a dramatically rise will be witnessed in this quantity, which will reach approximately 750 million people studying this language in the year 2030.
In addition, the figure for the two other languages will see the similar trends. In 2020, the number of students studying Spanish will be around 200 million and the figure for Mandarin will be roughly 100 million students. The quantity for Spanish will increase slightly to about 300 million before soaring to reach 500 million students for the rest of the period. Besides, the figure for Mandarin experience a significant rise to reach approximately 550 million in the year 2030.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11737089202 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5408188303 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8688214705 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0909090909 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189004849752 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835021090738 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377079986346 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123056281397 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333104879661 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.