The given line graph compares the data about the number of London's people who travel through below the earth plartforms during different timings during a day. It is cogent from the graph that people prefer to use underground station in early morning and mid evening.
Overall, the underground passenges number fluctuates during a day. In addition, Y axis represents the number of passengers, while different time periods are indicated by X axis.
The maximum passenger use the underground station facility at half past seven in the morning and the number of those passengers is 400, while at 6 O'clock in the morning and 4 P.M in the evening the number decreases sharply to 100. Additionally, the second highest underground passenges are found at 6 P.M (approximately 380), which is followed by 300 during 3 time periods in a day, 9 A.M, 4 P.M and around & o'clock in the evening.
Furthermore, from half past seven in the morning the number of passengers atart to decrease gradually until 10 A.M and after that these counts increase steadily till 4 P.M before it starts decline again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: O'clock
... of those passengers is 400, while at 6 Oclock in the morning and 4 P.M in the evening...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...hile at 6 Oclock in the morning and 4 P.M in the evening the number decreases sha...
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Suggestion: M
... underground passenges are found at 6 P.M approximately 380, which is followed by...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...300 during 3 time periods in a day, 9 A.M, 4 P.M and around & oclock in the eveni...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...ing 3 time periods in a day, 9 A.M, 4 P.M and around & oclock in the evening. ...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ing 3 time periods in a day, 9 A.M, 4 P.M and around & oclock in the evening. ...
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Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...ods in a day, 9 A.M, 4 P.M and around & oclock in the evening. Furthermore, from ha...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
... atart to decrease gradually until 10 A.M and after that these counts increase st...
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Suggestion: M
...these counts increase steadily till 4 P.M before it starts decline again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, second, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95628415301 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75207753626 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568306010929 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0775701823 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.571428571 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351471852253 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160607597081 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793528116422 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196745605886 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644996833048 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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