The diagram illustrates the life cycle and anatomy of a lady bird. Overall, the life cycle of a lady bird consists of four stages. It starts life as an egg and goes through two other stages before finally becoming an adult lady bird. With regard to its anatomy, a adult lady bug has seven main body parts.
The life cycle of a lady bird starts with an adult lady bird laying eggs on leaves. The egg stage is for 2-5 days and the egg develops into a larva and remains in the larval stage for 21 days. From the larva, the pupa is formed and this stage lasts seven days. This pupa develops and matures into an adult lady bird. As for the anatomy, a lady bird has 7 main body parts. The head consists of 2 antennas, eyes and a protonum. The trunk of an adult lady bird is covered with red elytra. The wings and the abdomen lie under the red elytra. This adult lady bug has six legs with three on each side.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... lady bird. With regard to its anatomy, a adult lady bug has seven main body part...
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Line 3, column 487, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t lady bird is covered with red elytra. The wings and the abdomen lie under the red...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, as for, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14772727273 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.86664806538 2.65546596893 70% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477272727273 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.7570720973 43.030603864 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.1538461538 112.824112599 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.5384615385 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.09268292683 318% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.460908488075 0.215688989381 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202921381201 0.103423049105 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.225063959105 0.0843802449381 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.433027700125 0.15604864568 277% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136551010166 0.0819641961636 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.9 13.2329268293 37% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.2 11.4140731707 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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