The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013.
The line chart shows how many people visited three London museums in the summer of 2013. Overall, the number of visitors to British museum and science museum increased, while the figure for natural history museum fell. It also clear that the British museum witnessed the highest number of visitors, and the reverse is true for the science museum.
In June, the British museum stood at the highest number of tourists, at 600,000. The figure for the science museum and the natural history museum were lower, at 550,000 and 400,000 respectively. In the next month, a dramatic increase can be seen in the number of people who visited the British museum, peaking to around 750,000. In contrast, the number people visited the natural history museum dropped gradually to just below 400,000. The science museum also saw a slight fall in the number of tourists, to 350,000.
By the next two months, the British had a significant drop in the number of tourists, at 500,000, it then had grown gradually to 650,000. Similarly, the figure for the natural history museum had continued to decrease, to 300,000, before a dramatic rise to around 450,000. On the other hand, the number of visitors to the science museum had levelled off during August but it had also risen slightly to just over 450,000.
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THE Line chart represents…
THE Line chart represents the number of people have visited three diffrent museum in summer.
From the span of june to july, the two museums that is science museum and natural history museum showed a decline phase almost having 400,000 people whereas British museaum rise up from 600,000 to approximately 750,000 people.
In the month of august , the popularity of british museum fell which downs the ratio no. of people. On the other hand, with minute decline in strength of people visited science museum and no diffrence in natural history museum.
If we see in september then there is increase no. of people in each of the museum with respect to the previous month.
Furthermore British museum showed gradual increase and then decrease atlast cross the intial strength while science museum were on contineously fell down but at the end the no. of visitors increased. In the last natural history museum went decrease , kept constant and further showed positive graph but overall visitors fell as conpared to initial point.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e museum and the natural history museum were lower, at 550,000 and 400,000 respectiv...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'in contrast', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235772357724 0.268076937826 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.113821138211 0.116061578633 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0813008130081 0.0759168565197 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0447154471545 0.0366838410393 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0121951219512 0.0131127313244 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130081300813 0.155750635184 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0243902439024 0.0379272487307 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.36697247706 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0406504065041 0.0210936926555 193% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00406504065041 0.00175180941692 232% => OK
Determiners: 0.130081300813 0.0948980150116 137% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00406504065041 0.00437022459523 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00813008130081 0.00967000014798 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1289.0 1161.00487805 111% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.9 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9128440367 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73763899035 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.449541284404 0.337110787985 133% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.288990825688 0.247514529752 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142201834862 0.171178102325 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0642201834862 0.112407865282 57% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36697247706 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467889908257 0.546246751206 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.8054552828 49.3433353143 83% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 8.93414634146 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8181818182 23.0094962315 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.8715420997 42.9750493124 53% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.181818182 135.714022679 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 23.0094962315 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 0.689975730869 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 48.717264387 47.7609492067 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.28571428571 2.94281807926 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381075216712 0.418131533498 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.237819124539 0.181151798455 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0870975588414 0.0850326197045 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.723243626292 0.706616315825 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0799095578382 0.157042692854 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223884561184 0.228904883108 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471080755151 0.108899403657 43% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.621984131692 0.367819155151 169% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0178123304981 0.0812612215331 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311671622529 0.316326947829 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573161870242 0.0921553760075 62% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70731707317 243% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 3.16585365854 284% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 7.1512195122 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.