The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
The line graph illustrates information about the number of people who went abroad and those that came to the UK from 1979 to 1999, while the bar chart indicates countries that UK resident visited in 1999. Overall it is immediately apparent that visits to and from the UK increased and also France was the most popular country to visit among UK residents.
To begin with, from line graph it can be seen that visits abroad by UK travelers and visits to the UK by overseas residents increased. Visits to and from the UK were started in similar amounts in 1979 (around lo million). Although visits abroad by UK residents rose significantly to just over 50 million, while in contrast, visits to the UK by overseas passengers grew up steadily to just under 30 million.
According to bar chart, France was the most popular country that UK residents visited in 1999, approximately 11 million visitors. The second popular country was Spain with 9 million visitors at the same time. The USA, Greece, and Turkey were far less popular among millions of UK visitors.
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in the introduction:
Overall it is immediately apparent that visits to and from the UK increased and also France was the most popular country to visit among UK residents.'
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'To begin with, from line graph it can be seen that visits abroad by UK travelers and visits to the UK by overseas residents increased.'
'According to bar chart, France was the most popular country that UK residents visited...'
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