Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other type of progress are equally important for a country.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The economic advancement is perceived as the crucial goal by numerous government. it is arguably by many people because other sectors are reasonably essential for the country. this essay disagrees with the statement as that economic is mainly goals for the country improvement.
economic sector is often seen as the only crucial matter for the country since the root of all problems facing by a nation is the failure of the economic status. The failing of nation’s economic sector would lead to the gravest problem such as monetary crisis and it could rapidly affect citizen life such as lost unemployment as well as increase the basic goods prize. If such issues happen, it will lead to other national difficulties such as poverty, criminality and so on. Therefore, most of the government in the world believed that improving economic sector means solving the country’s biggest issue.
The proponent of this idea sees that other sectors such as education and health are equally important for one nation as the sectors are main factors to produce a good quality of human resources. Without providing proper education and health, the country would be lost its resources to develop the nation economic. Consequently, the improvement of the nation would not happen because it lacks of healthy and educated workforce.
In my opinion, governments focusing on economic sector improvement as the nation’s main target is a biased view, since there are other sectors such as education and health which is equally important and need government's attention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, well, in fact, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.304 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83022543272 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 283.868780488 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7562654388 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.545454545 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153282214177 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666126432118 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517317799753 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114929062662 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509359457262 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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