The map below the center of a town called Oslo as it is now, and plans for its development.
The two maps of the center of the town of Islip give information about the city currently and in the future. Overall, a lot of modification can be observed during the forcast development.
First of all, according to the current map the center is close to a countryside. A main road deserves houses a school, several shops and a park.
Looking more closely at the map predicting the future development of the city, a lot of modification can be observed.the size of the center will increase in an oval shape, therefore the countryside will disappear. Moreover, the single road will be replaced by a bigger and carriageway. A pedestrian will deserve the Central Area. New house will be grouped in shopping mall. The next point is the garden area which will be smaller.As the will have more people the school will be bigger.
To sum up, the actual map of islip town center and the future planned development, a lot of modification are predicted. On the one hand the city will be bigger with more facilities.On the other hand the park will be reduced and the countryside will disappear. The city will have changed a great deal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: As
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Suggestion: On
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, therefore, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 1.00243902439 1397% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7461928934 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82347601375 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522842639594 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6663024462 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9166666667 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113549193744 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552121493932 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823852052608 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096638206879 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485193417815 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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