The given map illustrates the blueprint of the village of Ryemouth and its transformation from 1995 to the present.
On the whole, the village of Ryemouth witnesses a conspicuous alteration from the given period. Besides, the only part which remains unchanged is the hotel and cafe, which lie in the southeast of the map.
In 1995, there were several housing built in the northwest of the village. The farmland and the forest park were located in the northwest of the village. Moreover, the shop and fish market were situated aside the road which runs from west to the east. Hotel and cafe were located beside the intersection of the road, and lie opposite to each other. There was a fishing port on the sea.
However, as we can see in the present, the new road has been constructed in the northwest of the village, and couple of housing are built. Furthermore, the farmland and forest park are transformed into golf field and tennis court. The shop and fish market lie aside the road are replaced by restaurants and apartments, relatively. Apart from that, there is a car park established beside the hotel. Last but not least, the fishing port on the sea disappears.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, apart from, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79802955665 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61217550989 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2267820489 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.9230769231 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6153846154 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0813736186206 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313538220571 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581327413785 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805547278058 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807297945223 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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