The chart gives information about population of Garlsdon, nearest town with route for railway and main roads. In addition to these illustrate zones specification and show suitable supermarket sites.
Garlsdon town which live 65.000 people over this town. Significant part of population settle in the centre. There are two industry sites one of them in the north side of the town the oyher one is at south. Town including no traffic area at the centre. Site 1 is located north-west of the Garlsdon a bit far from house zone and town centre. This site is not effective for reaching all over the town. Site 2 is placed at centre area which do not traffic allowed. This site appropriate for reaching all around the town. There is one disadvantages that cars do not allow entering this area. Also site 2 has nearly same distance all of the neighboor town and located crossroad of mainroads. Railway also passing so close from second alternative.
For summarise, site 1 is far away most part of the town, this means can not reach easily. Site 2 is located at the centre people can arrive without a significant effort.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the nearest'.
Suggestion: , the nearest
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...t cars do not allow entering this area. Also site 2 has nearly same distance all of ...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...a. Also site 2 has nearly same distance all of the neighboor town and located crossroad of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79274611399 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58138230248 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559585492228 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.7754056006 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.6666666667 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.8666666667 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306553732365 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105980283502 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755539808218 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20027055979 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440872720342 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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