The maps below show the village of Stokeford in the years 1930 and 2010. The map of 2010 illustrates the changes incorporated in the village over a period of 80 years.
In the year 1930, the hamlet Stokeford was mostly covered by farmland in the . As revealed by the map, it had a couple of shops acoompanied by a post office which was just located adjacent the main road. It can be seen in the map that are very few residential houses in the village and all the houses, shops and post offices are connected by the central main road. The hamlet had a large garden with large house was situated in the middle of it flanked by trees on both sides.
The village underwent significant modifications in the next 80 years. As shown by the map in 2010, the farmlands in the southwestern and northeastern sector along with the shops are completely demolished. In its place, a lot of residential places have come up. The Primary school was modernised and made bigger. The map suggests that lot of side roads have been added that are surrounded by houses on both sides. The size of the garden has been reduced considerably while the erstwhile large house is replaced by a larger Retirement home. So, the village of Strokeford has seen a lot of changes since 1930 but the bridge over the river and the post office still stands unchanged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56485355649 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57058345625 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514644351464 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4085345012 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9230769231 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 5.23603664747 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198728144144 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082227353324 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114396235005 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177917315492 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116987224246 0.0819641961636 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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