Given flow chart describes the steps involved in university admission. Ideally it involves seven steps, but incase of rejection and incompleteness of application, the process will become more complicated.
Firstly, obtaining a high school degree is mandatory for the aplication, those students can download form from the Internet. Filled form is forwarded to the admin from there it will subject to validation. Aplications are either aproved or rejected, in some cases partially accepted. After getting rejected the aplication is no more valid, it will be cancelled automatically; in this situation the candidate can apply for alternative course.
On the other hands, partially accepted request's are rectified and resubmitted. Once aproved the aplication the students can complete the enrollment process. Enrolled candidates can select their preference subjects and register with deen Registration is the final step in entering the university.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: INCASE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in case of'?
Suggestion: in case of
...n. Ideally it involves seven steps, but incase of rejection and incompleteness of applica...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...requests are rectified and resubmitted. Once aproved the aplication the students can...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80575539568 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09337459898 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.726618705036 0.547539520022 133% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8328970302 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0617960843752 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268360567548 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383253181204 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496440664472 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443852919117 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 11.4140731707 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.06136585366 133% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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