The diagram illustrate the step by step production of tomato ketchup.
Overall, It is found that ketchup formation includes several steps like Sorting, Transportation, Crushing, Boiling, Packing, Quality check and Sales.
Initially, Tomatoes are picked and are put in a basket. Secondly, good and bad tomatoes are sorted out. Thirdly, the tomatoes in good condition are sent to the industry. Where they are cleaned and skin , seeds of the tomato are removed. Fourthly,they are crushed in a crusher. Fifthly, additives like Sugar, Vinegar and Salt are added . In the next step, the mix produced is boiled and left undisturbed for two hours to cool. Nextly, the prepared liquid is filled in bottles and labelled. After that Quality control check is done and once it is cleared, the bottles are packed in large cardboard and are shifting to different places like super markets, Bakeries,shops.. Different companies produce various brand names of ketchup. In the whole, the actual production process remains the same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34782608696 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77688528283 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.468660326 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2307692308 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3846153846 22.9334400587 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0916045276348 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326496823609 0.103423049105 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03297307164 0.0843802449381 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681491563655 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262442012714 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.86 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.06136585366 128% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.