One of the current environmental problems of the planet is worldwide land degradation. All the processes that change the condition of the soil, worsen its functions and lead to a loss of fertility, are the causes of this degradation. There are 3 main types of degradation at the moment. First and main factor, that occur around the world is over-grazing. This reason is 35% of alternations of soil. Second big cause is a deforestation. This kind of human activity violates the Earth ecosystem since ancient times. If all this continues, then soon there will be no place on earth suitable for life. Moreover, forest fires lead to the depletion and destruction of the earth.
Besides a significant contribution to the degradation of soil is made by traditional management of agricultural work. It is caused by the use of large heavy equipment, increasing of the size cultivated fields the number of pesticides. If we observe this degradation problem by region, for example in North America, Europe and Oceania, we can notice that more worse picture observed in Europe in all 3 main features of soil changing. However, dramatically over-grazing is noticed in Oceania, about 11,3%, twice bigger than in Europe and approximately in ten bigger that in North America.
In conclusion, it need to mark that degradation of soil happen worldwide, so we must to save our Earth from exceedingly human activities.
- The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007. 56
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- The graph below shows the average monthly use of health club in Miami and Florida by all full-time members over last year. The pie charts show the age profile of male and female members. 84
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 56
- People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest? 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
... Europe and Oceania, we can notice that more worse picture observed in Europe in all 3 mai...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...adation of soil happen worldwide, so we must to save our Earth from exceedingly human a...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06926406926 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08562974508 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2435585673 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6428571429 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123469261761 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427435379983 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319050102048 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690740553515 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350738454239 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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