The pie chart below show the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990.Causes of land degradation by region
The diagrams illustrate the information about the share of global degraded land causes classified by three different regions in 19990s.
Overall, it can be seen that over-grazing was the main reason of land damage in the worldwide, while European region was the most affected area globally.
Moving to detail, over-grazing was the main reason of land degradation, accounted more than a third. Followed by deforestation and over-cultivation involved approximately 30% of the damage. Moreover, unspecified causes contributed to a small number of degraded land.
In general, Europe was the most affected area of the degraded land. it was primarily caused by deforestation (9,8%). while over-cultivation and over-grazing involved in almost similar number of land damage causes (7.7% and 5.5% respectively). On the other hand, the main factor of land degradation in Oceania was over-grazing 11.3%, which is the highest number of land damage influence among all the regions. Meanwhile, deforestation accounted for 1.7% of the land damage. In addition, North America was the region that contributed least causes of land degradation.
- The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant 78
- The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. 84
- Q: In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society? 56
- The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure, business, and commercial purposes around the world over recent years. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights?Do you think flights should be taxed more? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...over, unspecified causes contributed to a small number of degraded land. In general, Europe ...
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Suggestion:
...ted to a small number of degraded land. In general, Europe was the most affected...
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Suggestion: It
...ost affected area of the degraded land. it was primarily caused by deforestation 9...
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Suggestion: While
...primarily caused by deforestation 9,8%. while over-cultivation and over-grazing invol...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'contributed the least'.
Suggestion: contributed the least
...tion, North America was the region that contributed least causes of land degradation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, third, while, in addition, in fact, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61403508772 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25021011703 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538011695906 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8537426472 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2727272727 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 1.13902439024 878% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272419966867 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125421107801 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592041580379 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190009387023 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387334193447 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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