The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1990.
The given circular pie chart, decribed that, there are three regions in the world during 1990. which were caused by three or more major reasons of land degradation. So the agricultural land become less productivity. It is clear and coherent representation.
Firstly, we can seen that, in the diagram, there are four main causes, which are affected on agricultural land. These are: over-cultivation(28%), over- grazing(35%), deforestation(30%) and other (7%), these causes are main behind the land degradation in the world.
Furthermore, in the land degradation including three major regions: North America, Europe and Oceania, while as three main causes over-cultivation, over-grazing. North America degraded the land by over-cultivation(3.3%), Europe in deforestation(9.8%) and Oceania in over-grazing(11.3%).
As a result, Europe at first position in the land degradation, which total land degradation is (23%) than the other to regions in the world during 1990.
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... and Oceania, while as three main causes over-cultivation, over-grazing. North Am...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70422535211 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.83807339423 2.65546596893 145% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7153789328 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317660743872 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138617520288 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801963950758 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204137381624 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100499148164 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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