The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants. Smmerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given pie chart illustrates the information regarding how much energy consumed by household in Australia.therefore, some accupants used electercity according the table.
Overall, the electercity used in typical Austalian home mandatory category of usage is heating and cooling because in Australia weather changes get horrible sometimes that is why Australian's use to much energy to use cooling and heating appliances.
Having a quick glance it is apparent that the highly used appliances for heating and cooling it account for 38% of electercity therefore, slightly down proportion of water heating products a quarter consumption of energy. Looking to the similers, lighting and refrigerators are at the same 7% .
Moving towards the rest of the information in middle, other appliances takes 16% of energy in the source of electricity stand by power had lowest proportion of number rather than other energey holders cooking also had only 1% above tha the stand by power consumptions. One people in the Australian house use 5,000-65,000 kw electricity and if they are two people than it consume 6,000-8,000 kw of electricity
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49431818182 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20033433729 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630681818182 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.521395786 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.166666667 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206837133226 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909618579143 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070434821949 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125049473263 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642044559879 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.2329268293 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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