The two pie charts depict the proportion of energy use and production in seven different sectors in Australia. It is noticeable that the highest consumption of energy in Australia is dominated in other appliances and water heating sector, while the most gas production from those activities is heating and cooling.
Other appliances and water heating have the biggest proportion of energy use in Australia at 24% and 23% respectively. Slightly lower from those percentages are heating and cooling achieved at one-fifth from the overall sector. However, other sectors have a percentage of just under 15%.
In term about energy production, although heating and cooling is not dominance in energy use, the proportion of energy production for this sector is the biggest at 38% compared to other appliances and water heating just below a quarter. Furthermore, as the same as the trend of percentage in energy use, the proportion of cooling, stand by, lighting and refrigeration are just under one-tenth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91101904522 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51572327044 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5631307046 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.142857143 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108770291251 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062519464358 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543537160277 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856959676511 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330852385867 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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