The supplied two pie charts represent how much money was received for childrens^ charity and its outlay in USA during one year.
Overall, donated food shared as the biggest proportion among in other revenue sources as the program services which accounted for a significant amount of expenditure.
In detail, the total received amount was a slight higher than the amount of expenditure $53/561,580 and $53,224,896 respectively. With regards to revenue sources, donated food comprised of over the half of total charity by 86.6%, while category community contribution was the second place with 10.4 %. By following it, the program revenue shared 2.2 %, while both Investment income and government grants together accounted for 0.4 % as the same equal other kinds of income.
According to outlay, the program service was the largest proportion of 95.8%, whereas, the expenditure of fundraising category was 2.6 %, and management and general, in contrast, shared the lowest expenditure by 1.6%.
- Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your 56
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 93
- The graph shows the availability of various sweeteners in the USA from 1966 to 2012 71
- We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 69
- The graph shows the availability of various sweeteners in the USA from 1966 to 2012 82
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49342105263 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8043461503 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638157894737 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.749914792 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.166666667 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 47.0 1.69756097561 2769% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119948650883 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666770609418 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950913211846 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870814683308 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107305586236 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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