The stipulated pie diagram describes the the sale of retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. The given parameters are travel, film or music, books and clothes.
In 2003 kiwis were spent major portion of their money on travel and clothes which amounts to 36% and 24% respectively. Whereas in 2013, their interest actually shifted from clothing to film or music with 33% of spending on the same. In 2003 the kiwis least popular items were cloths and film or music.
While 2013 figures showed a completely different trend, after a decade time kiwis total spending pattern was changed although items like travel and entertainment retained their positions just like the previous era but in a reverse manner. Entertainment being the favorite one replacing the travel. Furthermore during 2013 the new Zealanders spent very less on books and cloths.
It is clear from the diagram that over the period of 10 years, New Zealanders buying pattern changed significantly except items like travel and entertainment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...cribes the the sale of retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. The given ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'kiwis the least'.
Suggestion: kiwis the least
...3% of spending on the same. In 2003 the kiwis least popular items were cloths and film or m...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a reverse manner" with adverb for "reverse"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ositions just like the previous era but in a reverse manner. Entertainment being the favorite one r...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...eing the favorite one replacing travel. Furthermore during 2013 the new Zealanders spent ve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10303030303 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59235295582 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.7133946631 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5555555556 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146569485304 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748017208911 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111403290844 0.0843802449381 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107666150015 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870312980978 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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