The pie charts compare the proportion of electricity generation in terms of five types of fuel source in Australia and in France in the year 1980 and 2000.
It is clear that coal was the major source of producing electricity in 1980 and 2000 in Australia. Nuclear powder increased sharply to a peak in 2000, as the most important energy source in France. The capacity of energy production in two countries both improved dramatically in the year 2000.
The total production of electricity in Australia increased from 100 units to 170 units. Although the total amount in France was 10 units lower than Australian's, at 90 units, the number doubled up to 180 units in the year of 2000. 50% of the electricity was produced by coal in Australia in 1980, and the proportion saw an increase to 130 units in 2000, approximately three quarters of total amount. Coal and natural gas shared equal percentage of French half total amount in 1980, however, nuclear took over as the first option from 15 units to 126 units in 2000.
Hydro power became the second important source, producing from 20 units to 36 units, and natural gas and oil were no longer being used much in Australia, only 2% each. Coal and oil were still being used, with 25 units and as well as hydro power in France in 2000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, still, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52745770976 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517543859649 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1052865869 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273812232803 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127862225714 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754954606112 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18838545926 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817721208687 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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