Nowdays, in some countries that have hugely large proportion population of a young adults than a number of older people. This essay firstly discuss the avilability of strong and refresh minded people on the development of the countries secondly that would be lacked of experience well known person.
One of the principle advantage of young adult people are being healthy and strong in physically and mentally than old age people. Furthermore, by the involvement of a powerful and new cool minded people in emplyoment sector, that would be helpful to the building of countries. Obviously, young people can perform the an extraordinary work in any sector because they have huge new zeak and enthusiasm. In addition, world greatest scientific investigation center Nasa, whereas that have maximum availability of youngsters than older age people.
The main disadvantages associated with that would be lacked of experienced and capable person on the new creation and invention. However, an older age people who have knowledge and techniques about different thing by the long participation on these sector, in order to without participation of well konwn experienced people that would be difficult in the investigation and construction new thing. As well as older people who has ability to bear any work and has knowledge of different subject matter as well as they known the significant of work so they can give the full of concern on any work and a activities.
In conclusion, the benefits it is good for the countries development and new construction by the availability of a new strong generation, must be weighed against the drawbacks such as lack of knowledge and an experience for new creation and construction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'adult'?
Suggestion: adult
... large proportion population of a young adults than a number of older people. This ess...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: IN_PRINCIPAL[3]
Message: Did you mean 'principal' (=main)?
Suggestion: principal
...rience well known person. One of the principle advantage of young adult people are bei...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: the; an
...es. Obviously, young people can perform the an extraordinary work in any sector becaus...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sector' or 'these sectors'?
Suggestion: this sector; these sectors
...rent thing by the long participation on these sector, in order to without participation of w...
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Line 5, column 600, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ive the full of concern on any work and a activities. In conclusion, the benef...
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Line 5, column 600, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a activity' or simply 'activities'?
Suggestion: a activity; activities
...ive the full of concern on any work and a activities. In conclusion, the benefits it is g...
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Line 7, column 48, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...lusion, the benefits it is good for the countries development and new construction by the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 3.97073170732 504% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 965.302439024 150% => OK
No of words: 277.0 196.424390244 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21660649819 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07057909758 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494584837545 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 283.868780488 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0188645672 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.5 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2 5.23603664747 252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125614249243 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648389571279 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900308851349 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913731208281 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858957349031 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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