Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring to your notice the high level of disturbance caused by a newly opened restaurant, which operates until late night. This is a grave issue for us, as we are unable to concentrate on our studies and sleep properly. Could you please help us in resolving the problem.
Let me explain my situation, the brand new joint is a musical theme based outlet, so it has karaoke nights and jam sessions every night from 9 -12 pm in the night. Thus, it causes much noise and the volume is turned up during the live performances, which is frustrating and annoying for me and I cannot concentrate on my assignments.
I would suggest the following: The owner changed its timings for the jam play and karaoke sessions from 9 -12 pm to 6 - 9 pm, so that we can doze off harmoniously and study in peace. Additionally, they can turn the volume down and do their activities indoors without creating much nuisance. could you please look into this matter with your urgent attention.
Thank you for your help.
Yours faithfully,
Mustafa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 292, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Could
...indoors without creating much nuisance. could you please look into this matter with y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 5.60731707317 499% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69680851064 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64941509634 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691489361702 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.2704041517 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4 5.23603664747 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0956664532805 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502298468365 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578886752543 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797600345685 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606900846505 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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