In these challenging times, when everyone is struggling to earn daily bread for their family, acquiring the homeownership is not an easy task. Still, for centuries, we have seen that people have been spending a hefty amount of their investments in real estate markets to buy a suitable property for long-term security. In this essay, we will dive deep into gazillion factors that are accountable for this type of thinking before filtering the worth of the decision.
It is often seen that renting a house in some of the countries is a costly venture, which gives an added responsibility to take care of someone else's property. Moreover, it is always appreciable to use monthly rental payment in favor of monthly mortgage installments, which ensures you that slowly and steadily the property is becoming your own equity. Apart from this, an individual is no longer in bond to follow all the restricted laws designed by the owner of the rented house. For instance, a person is free to modify or renovate the house design as per his/her choice. Hence, these factors play a pivotal role in convincing a person to step ahead to buy a house of their dreams.
Now the question arises, how far it is the right decision to indulge in such a costly long-term investment? Well, the effectiveness of the situation is highly variable and depends on financial, or personal factors. For example, some people may want to be flexible to relocate due to vocational opportunities without dealing with issues of selling an owned house and facing losses, while others may consider owning a house as their stepping stone to enhancing social or financial structure. Hence, to justify the situation's worth as positive or negative depends on the individual's current situation as a whole.
To conclude, while the views on whether to own or rent a house vary largely among the masses. In my opinion, although investing in a house is a good idea, this personal decision should be respected without prioritizing it as a social stigma, as each individual is the best judge of his/her own circumstances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 965.302439024 180% => OK
No of words: 350.0 196.424390244 178% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95428571429 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 3.73543355544 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82105784183 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 106.607317073 194% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591428571429 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 283.868780488 194% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3309962515 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.857142857 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273133617487 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780767509296 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047197590093 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150008179426 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0146543445072 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 40.7170731707 255% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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