While some people believe that adaptation with unfulfilling situations in our lives is an appropriate way to deal with, other people including me think in every problematic circumstance we, humans, ought make a real effort to make improvement and find solutions.
Living in an unsatisfactory situation for a long time can have a negative impact on our personality and decreases the level of our self-steam which directly influences on our productivity and it can make our situation worse. Additionally, it is generally believed that improvement in our lives is a result of huge changes and important decisions, however,by doing small changes in our lives and have enough commitments to our planed goals we do not have to live in an undesired situation and feel as if we are victim in this world.
On the other hand, there are some people who believe sometimes due to circumstances around us we should adjust ourselves with unpleasant situations. Firstly, making even insignificant changes in life can be totally stressful for some people, if these kinds of people wake up each and every morning and think for example how can i endure my terrible job, they are more likely to be anxious all the time. Furthermore, by being extremely ambitious people might loose their current situation. So they need to learn how to adapt themselves when their lives are not ideal.
In conclusion, although some people may argue that adaptation skills are essential for all members of society, i would say, humankind has unlimited potential to make difference in harsh situations and nobody is allowed to underestimate the miracle abilities of human.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'ought to make'?
Suggestion: ought to make
...ry problematic circumstance we, humans, ought make a real effort to make improvement and f...
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...ory situation for a long time can have a negative impact on our personality and d...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of huge changes and important decisions, however,by doing small changes in our li...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , by
...hanges and important decisions, however,by doing small changes in our lives and ha...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'believe'.
Suggestion: sometimes believe
...e other hand, there are some people who believe sometimes due to circumstances around us we shou...
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...some people who believe sometimes due to circumstances around us we should adjust...
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...wake up each and every morning and think for example how can i endure my terrible...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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... morning and think for example how can i endure my terrible job, they are more l...
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...ious all the time. Furthermore, by being extremely ambitious people might loose t...
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...being extremely ambitious people might loose their current situation. So they need t...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13432835821 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9701211279 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 106.607317073 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623134328358 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 283.868780488 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.1263318005 43.030603864 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 172.0 112.824112599 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.875 5.23603664747 246% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129738901216 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603852253356 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388840251043 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0816732910115 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339830083225 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 61.2550243902 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.4329268293 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.0658536585 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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