In this contemporary world, it is generally thought by a few individuals that people have more preferences in each and every field of life. I completely agree with this notion and the reasons for this stand will be explained in the further paragraph.
To comments with, there are myriad reasons in favour of large number of choices people have today. One of the most prominent reasons is the globalisation. Due to globalisation people have the access to use the products which might be manufactured in different parts of the world. Hence, they do not have to rely on only locally produced products. Similarly, due to globalisation people have started sharing their cultural and traditional values. So, they can take many things from different traditions. For example, pizza is related to the Italian culture but these days pizza is famous in all over the world that too in many combinations.
Another point to consider is that industrialisation. Due to industrialisation manufacturing companies produce their products in the mass scale and they are dumping their products in global market. Moreover, to remain in competition companies keep updating their products for people who are coming from different social and economic backgrounds. Therefore, people get the access of range of products at different prices. Apart from that technology is very much advance these days. It makes the things even more easier and provides a large number of choices to people. For example, people can watch any movies, attend online classes of their favourite teachers and purchase products online from any part of the world by sitting in different parts of the world.
In conclusion, I retreat my view by saying that globalisation, industrialisation and the technology give many choices to the people.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...elated to the Italian culture but these days pizza is famous in all over the world t...
^^^^
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsider is that industrialisation. Due to industrialisation manufacturing companie...
^^
Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ce these days. It makes the things even more easier and provides a large number of choices ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...he things even more easier and provides a large number of choices to people. For example, people ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, apart from, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 965.302439024 156% => OK
No of words: 288.0 196.424390244 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23263888889 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02449291421 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 106.607317073 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548611111111 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 283.868780488 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6016496808 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6470588235 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17619248966 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557284151183 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475532997138 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115099592209 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589239953642 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 567, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...elated to the Italian culture but these days pizza is famous in all over the world t...
^^^^
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsider is that industrialisation. Due to industrialisation manufacturing companie...
^^
Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ce these days. It makes the things even more easier and provides a large number of choices ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 532, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...he things even more easier and provides a large number of choices to people. For example, people ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, apart from, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 965.302439024 156% => OK
No of words: 288.0 196.424390244 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23263888889 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02449291421 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 106.607317073 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548611111111 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 283.868780488 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6016496808 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6470588235 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17619248966 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557284151183 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475532997138 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115099592209 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589239953642 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 40.7170731707 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.