The table and pie chart give information about population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas
The pie chart and table illustrates the proportion of people who live in Australia according to their origins and allocations.
Overall, the majority of people staying in Australia are Australian. Besides, most residents choose to live in urban.
Regarding the pie chart, it is clear that Australian nationality accounts for the largest proportion of 73%, which is three times more than the total of another sectors. British, New Zealander, Chinese and Dutch respectively comprise of 7%, 3%, 2% and 1% of the chart, which is still 1% lower than the “other ethnicity“ sector that constitute 14% by the time of the research.
Concerning the location allocation via the table, all cities tends to Have the dominant reference, approximately 80% to 90%. Beside occupying the highest proportion of residence on Australia, Australian also have the most remarkable number of people living in rural area: 20%. On the contrary, most Chinese migrants enjoy staying in cities, only 1% of them choose to live in the countryside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...alander, Chinese and Dutch respectively comprise of 7%, 3%, 2% and 1% of the chart, which i...
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Message: Unpaired symbol: '”' seems to be missing
...chart, which is still 1% lower than the “other ethnicity“ sector that constitute ...
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...still 1% lower than the “other ethnicity“ sector that constitute 14% by the time ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, regarding, so, still, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23780487805 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91585212841 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628048780488 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6812014539 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.375 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164739503996 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673833510878 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799109144385 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108962742091 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085545542359 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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