The table shows the number of students who did research in Australian universities, and the pie charts compare the proportion of these students by gender. The figures were given for 2001 and 2010.
Overall, the number of Australian research students increased significantly over the given period. The figure for local students is always higher than that for international ones.
In 2001, 33,657 students who were carrying out research in Australia were locals compared to only 5,192 students from outside the country. By 2010, the number of local students had risen to nearly 40,000, and international students had also witnessed a nearly three-fold increase in its population.
In 2001, the proportion of local male students was equal to that of females, at 43% for each, while there was a disparity in terms of gender among international students, with the figure for females (9%) being more than twice as high as that for males (4%). Over the following ten years, female local students outnumbered their male counterparts, with the percentage of the former being 4% higher. However, in the international group, the figure for females was slightly lower than that for males.
- A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to their social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 61
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. Other people think that taking part in individual sports like tennis or swimming is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems.Do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some findings have revealed that cities around the world are growing large Could you outline the possible causes and predicts consequences 89
- People in many countries are spending less time with their family. What are the reasons, and effects of this? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('nearly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('three-fold') instead of another adjective.
...ternational students had also witnessed a nearly three-fold increase in its population. In 2001, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18947368421 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77323975267 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8506816142 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.555555556 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170286726918 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878116928075 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777880365477 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140445415534 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0915992678346 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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