The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
Looking at the section, we can see that turkey and Ireland spend most of their income in food, drinks and tobacco. From thus provided data, we can also infer that the amount of consumer spending in turkey is nearly as double as italy and Sweden, Sweden having least consumer spending in food, drinks and tobacco combined.
When it comes down to fashion, Italian nationals seem to be the most enthusiast since their spending in clothing and footwear comprises of whooping 9% of their total spending while Swedish nationals are least interested in clothing and footwear which comprises only 5.4% of their total spending.
total spendings for leisure and education seems to be significantly lower for all of the countries amongst which study has been done, especially in case of Spanish people who spend only 1.98% of their total spendings.
To summarise, Turkey dominates the consumer spending sector by percentage in food/drinks/tobacco and Leisure/Education sector while italy is dominating in clothing/footwear sector.
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 66
- The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. 78
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 54
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 75
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
Looking at the section, we can see that turkey and Irel...
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...y as double as italy and Sweden, Sweden having least consumer spending in food, drinks and t...
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Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...their spending in clothing and footwear comprises of whooping 9% of their total spending whi...
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Suggestion: Total
...s only 5.4% of their total spending. total spendings for leisure and education see...
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...gs for leisure and education seems to be significantly lower for all of the count...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40372670807 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01635780587 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60248447205 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.2594198392 43.030603864 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 174.0 112.824112599 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.2 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107846105101 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626915663995 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264761845706 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658694809777 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206274542005 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.2329268293 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.4329268293 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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