The table below presents the food consumption per a person weekly in a European country in 1992, 2002 and 2012.
The table depicts the amount of diet per capita in a week in a European nation in three years (1992, 2002 and 2012)
Generally, Their dietary pattern did not see much change over the three given years. Besides, vegetables were the most popular food in every their meals, the opposite was true for Cheese.
As can be seen from the table, in 1992, the consumption of vegetables was the highest, at 2140 grams, was four times Bean and 837 grams of Wheat also used in the same time. The amount of vegetables, bean and wheat be eaten continuously slight rose in the period of time with at 2220 grams, 977 grams and 590 grams respectively in 2012.
The quantity of meat and cheese consumed was 1148 grams and 113 grams sequentially in the first year of the survey. Afterwards, there was a small increase of more than 60 grams in the amount of meat in 2012 before fell down to 1132 grams in the final ten years. Meanwhile, Cheese's statistic went trivially up to 125 grams in 2002 and remain unchanged in 2012.
- The media should include more stories which report good news To what extent do you agree or disagree 90
- The chart below shows the number of passengers who used public transport in Somewhere town from 2012 to 2015 78
- It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill To what extent do you agree of disagree 56
- The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- The range of technology available to people is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor Others think it has an opposite effect Discuss both views and give your opinions 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... years 1992, 2002 and 2012 Generally, Their dietary pattern did not see much c...
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e eaten continuously slight rose in the period of time with at 2220 grams, 977 grams and 590 g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51912568306 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32279649534 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3767137895 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.142857143 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155693988252 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680739533735 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712227295079 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121892594751 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134013427338 0.0819641961636 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.93 61.2550243902 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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