The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The table provides figures about consumption of telephone, television, refrigerator and other consumer durables payed by British people during eleven years started from 1972.
Overall, the whole people which live in Britain owed more consumer dubables in 1983 than 1972. In 1983, the majority of households has almost all types of goods, especially television, refrigerator and washing machine. These appliances were
over 94% of households.
The percentage of Central heating and Telephone soared from 1972 to 1983 to 31% respectively 35%, which means that more people want more these consumer durables across the period of 11 years. The television remains with almost same level at the started period rose slowly to 98%.
In contrast, the video appears in households in the last year recording a percentage of 18% and the dishwasher was owned by British people began in the second half of period.
- The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 56
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- Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think is has lead to many positive developments in all aspects of their lives. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
- An essay 78
- The graph shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an English town in 2012 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['second', 'so', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.300613496933 0.268076937826 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.110429447853 0.116061578633 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0674846625767 0.0759168565197 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0429447852761 0.0366838410393 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.159509202454 0.155750635184 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0245398773006 0.0379272487307 65% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68305557653 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0184049079755 0.0210936926555 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0920245398773 0.0948980150116 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0122699386503 0.00967000014798 127% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 909.0 1161.00487805 78% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.9 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.35664335664 5.90752243213 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73763899035 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.398601398601 0.337110787985 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286713286713 0.247514529752 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.202797202797 0.171178102325 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132867132867 0.112407865282 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68305557653 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65034965035 0.546246751206 119% => OK
Word variations: 59.6930741485 49.3433353143 121% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4285714286 23.0094962315 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7197180189 42.9750493124 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.857142857 135.714022679 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 23.0094962315 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.689975730869 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 49.0999000999 47.7609492067 103% => OK
Elegance: 3.16 2.94281807926 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351153948797 0.418131533498 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126424110912 0.181151798455 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0170367445557 0.0850326197045 20% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.73482277108 0.706616315825 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.266402576603 0.157042692854 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177251484583 0.228904883108 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821301381486 0.108899403657 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.154613177652 0.367819155151 42% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0677346478108 0.0812612215331 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194915811086 0.316326947829 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992671062793 0.0921553760075 108% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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