The given table comapared the consumer durables of eight technical appliances consumed by British families over the period of 11 years commencing from 1972. Generally speaking, the most popular technical items was television in all over the period while dishwasher were least popular technical gadgets of Uk.
According to the table the TVs and vacuum cleaner were always popular in UK, in 1972 their consumtion was 93% and 87% respectively. Likewise that have similar ownership of both appliances refrigerator and washine machine in English famimies. Surprisingly, that have fire breathing risen of central heating consumption, it has made double proportion at later decade than previous period. Meanwhile, the video has introduced in 1983 with only 18% and the least popular technical devices diswasher has remained under 5 % over the period. Interestingly, the the consumption of television has 42% in 1972 and reached at 77% in 1983.
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- THE TABLE BELOW SHOWS THE CONSUMER DURABLES(TELEPHONE, REFRIGERATOR,ETC) OWNED IN BRITAIN FROM 1972 TO 1983.WRITE A REPORT FOR A UNIVERSITY LECTURER DESCRIBING TH INFORMATION SHOWN BELOW. 56
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- In today’s world, many people use mobile phones and the internet to communication with others. This has resulted in the use of new words and different forms of spelling and grammar. Why do you think these change have happened? Are they positive or nega 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...nsumtion was 93% and 87% respectively. Likewise that have similar ownership of both app...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'appliances'' or 'appliance's'?
Suggestion: appliances'; appliance's
...ise that have similar ownership of both appliances refrigerator and washine machine in Eng...
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Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...der 5 % over the period. Interestingly, the the consumption of television has 42% in 1...
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Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...der 5 % over the period. Interestingly, the the consumption of television has 42% in 1...
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Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the consumption of television has 42% in 1972 and reached at 77% in 1983. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49315068493 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9188826591 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671232876712 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3201857792 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.666666667 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0924483790072 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480852050682 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555754022565 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764719691239 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168189066005 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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