The tabular chart illustrates the information about the percentage of consumption of households that owned in Britain during 1972-1983.
It is vivid from the given data that, almost one -thrid households in Britain had central heating machines in 1972 which was increased each year and reached to 64% in 1983 which shows that the central heating machines users almost double in 12 years. Moreover, television was the most common household equipment as 93% households had them. This ratio reached to 98% with slight increase in every year till 1983. However, the video was introduced in 1983 when only 18% households had them.
Moving further, it is evident from the tabular chart that vacuum cleaner, refrigerator and washing machines were three most popular household appliances after TV which was owned by 70% house owners in 1972 and the percentage increased to over 90 after 10 years. Interestingly, dishwashers were very less popular as only 3% families owned them in 1978 and user's percentage reached to only 5 in 1983. However, the percentage of houses that had telephones was only 42% but with their popularity, this percentage reached to 77 after 12 years.
All in all, the television was the most popular consumer durable while the dishwasher was the least common type of durables. However, vacuum cleaner, refrigerator and washing machines were three other popular durables for the given period in Britain.
- Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism? What changes would you like to see in the new century? at least 250 words 61
- Some people think that only the government can make significant changes in society while others think that individuals can have a lot of influence What is your opinion 69
- The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in the year 1999. 78
- The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve a crime.Do you agree or disagree? 78
- The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tage reached to only 5 in 1983. However, the percentage of houses that had teleph...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 965.302439024 124% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20434782609 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66186753096 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3060189709 43.030603864 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.7 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120134054993 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549227342793 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457205759918 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0946003319694 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042372614027 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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