The table provides information on the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum in years before and after refurbishment.However, the pie charts illustrate the visitors’ satisfaction based on surveys which were conducted in the both mentioned years.
Overall, it can be observed from the charts that after making changes in the museum's building the number of individuals went to aforementioned place as well as people's content increased.
In regard to the number of visitors shown at table, the figure experienced a raise of 18000 people from its initial number at 74000 after making some improvements.
Turning to pie chart, based on survey was conducted in the year before refurbishment the proportion of people who were very satisfied and satisfied was accounted for 15% and 30%, respectively. Nevertheless, the figure for very satisfied doubled and that of satisfied grow and reach the rate of 40% in the year after rennovation.
By contrast, the percentage of very dissatisfied and dissatisfied which were initially 10% and 40% in total, followed an opposite trend and saw a fall of 5% and 25%, respectively. It is also worth mentioning that in both years 5% of museum-goers avoided participating in the surveys.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...in years before and after refurbishment.However, the pie charts illustrate the visitors...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, nevertheless, so, well, as well as, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28717948718 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29708097145 2.65546596893 124% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.7216236207 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.285714286 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295406794083 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129628939888 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905020556879 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150677462926 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952475112409 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.2329268293 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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