while the table compares the proportion of people who visited Ashdown museum the year before and the year after renovation,two given pie charts illustrate the level of visitors` satisfaction during the same two periods based on a result of survey which was conducted.
looking from an overall perspective,it is apparent from the data provided by the table that the number of visitors experienced a considerable growth after the time the museum gain its brand new look.likewise, upon taking a holistic glance at these two presented pie charts ,it is understandable that people became more satisfied with their visit owning to the museum modification.
Taking a precise look at the table reveals that there was a rise of 18000 in number of visitors when museum was remodeled.
upon comparing these two pie charts,it can highly noticeable from the information supplied that there was an exponential decrease of 25 percent in number of dissatisfied people after refurbishment ,nonetheless, the proportion of very satisfied people witnessed a remarkable increase of 20 percent.Although the number of very satisfied people halved through the process of redecorating ,the segment which was taken up by people with no response guarded itself from any changes and remained steady.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, look, nonetheless, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14850758297 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 22.4926829268 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.893981014 43.030603864 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 271.5 112.824112599 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.0 22.9334400587 218% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330161435033 0.215688989381 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211488915482 0.103423049105 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124468141443 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211488915482 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124468141443 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.1 13.2329268293 220% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 61.2550243902 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.0 10.3012195122 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.77 8.06136585366 134% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.9970731707 200% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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