A glance at the table provided reveals a deal of visitors of Ashdown Museum in two different peroid of time in before and after construction, while the chart shows result of satisfaction about the Museum with same type of comparision and period.
It is apparent at table that visitors sharply increased from 7400 people before renovation to 92000 in after that moment, while survey had done to show the sense of satisfcation of Ashdown Museum visitors that used three different catogries (namely satisfied, dissatisfied and no response) in before and after refrubishment.
To begin with, conclusively, dissatisfied people were dominated before it dramatically declined approximately 40 per cent to 15 per cent by the end renovation, while the least was no respon type with 5 percent and steady same point after the realisation.
suprisingly, the sense of satisfaction were increased and replaced the popular trend by the end refrubrisment with 30 to 40 satisfied and 15 to 35 very satisfied, however dissatisfied and very dissatisfied category had sharply decreased.
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- The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to make all young drivers complete a safe driving education course before being licensed to drive.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country’s development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social, and commercial prespective.What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce there pressures ? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Suprisingly
...dy same point after the realisation. suprisingly, the sense of satisfaction were increas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36686390533 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17755335888 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562130177515 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 33.7379608157 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 226.75 112.824112599 201% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.25 22.9334400587 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272493822164 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163823133701 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955596975419 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163823133701 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955596975419 0.0819641961636 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.0 13.2329268293 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.39 61.2550243902 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 10.3012195122 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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