The table illustrates wages of secondary and high school teaching staff in five countries in the year 2009.
Overall, table indicates starting salary range, after 15 years and maximum salary which is possible to get in the countries Australia, Denmark, Luxemburg, Japan and Korea. In addition table shows years to reach maximum salary.
Luxembourg has the highest salary level in the start of career which is 80,000 which is almost a twice more than other countries indicators. According to the table after 15 years of working as a teacher they might get 119.000. maximum salary of teaching staff in Luxembourg is 132.000 however it requires 30 years to reach this amount of money. Denmark has 45000 starting salary, although the maximum salary reaches only 54.000 in 8 years.
Australia, Japan and Korea have the lowest starting wages which are 28.000, 34.000 and 30.000 relatively. After 15 years of experience teachers in secondary and high schools get 65000 in Japan and 48.000 in Australia and Korea, which is the lowest index in these countries. The maximum wage in Japan is 86000, and 62000 in Korea, while Australia’s maximum salary remains the same as after 15 years of experience. Teachers of Australia and Denmark might reach maximum salary sooner than Japanese teachers, 9 years, 8 years and 37 years relatively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1123.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15137614679 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5713167625 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7318056253 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.090909091 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219126604997 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103636261045 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854241660987 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177772251367 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858494379542 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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