The table below shows the television viewing figures for sports by country, in millions
The table compares the number of television viewership in millions who enjoyed four types of sports in various countries. The table also depicts the total audience for each of the four seperate countries.
Overall, Americans watch sports on the television more than the other three nations and tennis is the most common sport which people prefer to watch.
In terms of tennis, it is popular in the USA with 7 million views and the number of people in all four countries is equal to the average of 6.5 million viewers. Once again, in the USA, golf is the sport having the most people watching (11.2 mi...
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Comments
The table compares the
The table compares the numbers of people who watch four types of sports on television in four different nations.
It is clear that more Americans, than the people of other three countries, watch sports on television. In all four countries, tennis is the most popular sport on television.
America has the highest number with 25.2 million viewers, followed by the UK with 20.3 million. The figures for Australia and Canada are lower, respectively at 17.4 and 14.5 million. The total number of tennis viewers is nearly 26 million, and there are around 6-7 million people watch it in each country.
The total athletics watchers are about 17 million, approximately two-thirds of tennis viewers. Not many people watch motor racing on television compared to other sports, with 12.7 million. In the USA and Canada, only 1-1.5 million people watch motor racing, but it is more popular in the UK and Australia. Golf is very common in the USA with 11 million seers. However, it is not as general in the other countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the most people watching 11.2 million. Whereas, the number of viewers in the other thr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97584541063 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57654186742 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56038647343 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The sentence length is short
Sentence length SD: 25.4633101793 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.6363636364 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278031918187 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113126487371 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04222013937 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166315043224 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394693984393 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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