The table below showsthe figures for improsenment in five countries between 1930 and 1980

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...1980 in five different countries britain,australia,new zealand,Usa,Canada. Canada ...
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... countries britain,australia,new zealand,Usa,Canada. Canada had the highest ...
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...n,australia,new zealand,Usa,Canada. Canada had the highest number of impriso...
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...ber of imprisonments among all countries in 1930 at excatly 120 thousands people,...
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... in 1930 at excatly 120 thousands people,somewhat 10 thousands ımprisonments more than th...
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... the number of imprisonments in Britain.This figüre slighttly went down and remained...
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...ed below the number of Usa imprisonments in 1980 ,reaching somewhat 100 thousands...
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... ,reaching somewhat 100 thousands people,despite fluctuations.Similarly the number of i...
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...0 thousands people,despite fluctuations.Similarly the number of imprisonments in Usa was...
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...ds people,despite fluctuations.Similarly the number of imprisonments in Usa was e...
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... of imprisonments in Usa was excatly 100 thousands people in 1930,somewhat 30 tho...
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... in 1930,somewhat 30 thousands of people more than the number of New zealands imp...
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...umber of New zealands imprispnments for this years,exatly identical the number of Br...
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...ew zealands imprispnments for this years,exatly identical the number of Britian impriso...
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...cal the number of Britian imprisonments.But this figüre significantly increased and...
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...ing somewhat 140 thousands imprisonments,despite fluctuations.although The number of im...
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...risonments,despite fluctuations.although The number of imprisonments in britain w...
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...the number of new zealands imprisonments,reaching nearly 100 thousands of people,just bel...
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... zealands imprisonments,reaching nearly 100 thousands of people,just below the number of Austral...
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...,reaching nearly 100 thousands of people,just below the number of Australias imprison...
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...number of Australias imprisonments. In contrast,The number of imprisonmets ...
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...alias imprisonments. In contrast,The number of imprisonmets in New zealnan ...
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... In contrast,The number of imprisonmets in New zealnan was far above than briti...
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...nmets in New zealnan was far above than britians imprisonments at somewhat 80 th...
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...ople for this year,despite fluctuations.Also the number of imprisonments in New zeal...
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...ople for this year,despite fluctuations.Also the number of imprisonments in New zeal...
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...e number of imprisonments in New zealand,Britain and Ausrtalia was excatly same in 1970 ...
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...1970 at nearly 80 thousands people. Overall it is clear that ,Usa and Canda ...
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... people. Overall it is clear that ,Usa and Canda had the highest imprisonme...
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...sonments remained far behind from other countries numbers in 1980.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 965.302439024 169% => OK
No of words: 269.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06691449814 4.92477711251 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.29742992746 2.65546596893 162% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.434944237918 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 283.868780488 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 22.4926829268 298% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 374.035008388 43.030603864 869% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 408.0 112.824112599 362% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.25 22.9334400587 293% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 1.69756097561 2297% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968073309299 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858626120785 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403922560822 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858626120785 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403922560822 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.8 13.2329268293 308% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -4.99 61.2550243902 -8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 6.51609756098 279% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 10.3012195122 297% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.11 11.4140731707 167% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.06136585366 130% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.4329268293 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.9970731707 262% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.0658536585 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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