The provided tables illustrate the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney on a particular weekend in 2018. As it is observed, the temperature in Sydney in three given days is much higher than in London, while the time of daylight in London was shorter and lower than in Sydney.
As it is presented in the tables, there was a slight rise in temperature of both cities from 28th to 30th December. In London, the average temperature was lower than in Sydney, it ranged from 3 to 10 degrees Celsius. On the contrary, the temperature in Sydney is pretty high, which ranged from 17 to 31 degrees Celsius in over three consecutive days.
Additionally, the sunrise time in Sydney was much earlier, which rose at 5:45 a.m on the 28th and 29th, and at 5:46 a.m on the 30th, while the sunrise time in London was approximately at 8:06 a.m. Moreover, the amount of daylight in Sydney was longer than in London.
In conclusion, the temperature and the amount of daytime in Sydney were much higher than in London in December 2018.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s lower than in Sydney, it ranged from 3 to 10 degrees Celsius. On the contrary, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, while, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65217391304 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65420004574 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461956521739 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.86023157 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.285714286 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20055082223 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126099390677 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925478339964 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146948003068 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07609348846 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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