Task 1 The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia the UK and other regions

1. The line graph illustrates the proportion of people who were born in Asia, the UK, and other regions inhabited in Australia between 1976 to 2011.
It is clear that the percentage of people born in Asia increased significantly throughout the period while the UK saw a declining trend.
Starting at about 14% in 1976, the UK has the highest percentage of people living in Australia. However, this figure continuously declined to hit a low of ảound 5% in 2011. Likewise the UK, the other countries which began at 1% and initially ranked just behind the UK's , saw a considerable fall from 12% to around 7% in the first 10 years. Between 1986 to 2006, there was a significant growth in the number of residents living in other countries from about 7% to around 14%. The period from 2006 to 2011 saw a slight decrease in the rate of inhabitants from other countries from about 14% to around 12%. By contrast, the proportion of people living in Asia began at the lowest point in comparison with the UK and other regions at around 3% in 1976. From 1976 to 2011, the percentage of people living in Asia surged dramatically from about 3% to 15%
Turning to the total, with around 23% of all the population, the total population in Australia ranked the highest in comparison with the others 3. Between 1976 to 2001 saw a considerable decline in the proportion of residents from about 25% to around 20% before there was a significant rise in the percent of inhabitant to 25% in the last year.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...lined to hit a low of ảound 5% in 2011. Likewise the UK, the other countries which began...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and initially ranked just behind the UKs , saw a considerable fall from 12% to aro...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, likewise, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 33.7804878049 225% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 265.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61886792453 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6944267578 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467924528302 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8148447558 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.4 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321362684596 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154903313988 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122532836346 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229029913796 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129182083094 0.0819641961636 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...lined to hit a low of ảound 5% in 2011. Likewise the UK, the other countries which began...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and initially ranked just behind the UKs , saw a considerable fall from 12% to aro...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, likewise, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 33.7804878049 225% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 265.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61886792453 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6944267578 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467924528302 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8148447558 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.4 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321362684596 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154903313988 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122532836346 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229029913796 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129182083094 0.0819641961636 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.