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The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.
Both pie charts compare the percentage of energy resources in the United States of America in 1980 and 1990.
Overall, it can be seen that the greatest change was in the proportion of energy sources to the oils energy. Therefore, the smallest change was in the percentage of energy sources to the nuclear power and hydroelectric power.
In 1980, the most high percentage of oil energy was 42%, while in 1990 this proportion was a gradual decrease in 33%. In contrast, the second highest percentage was natural gas with 26% in 1980, while there was a slight decline in 25% in 1990. It is clear tha...
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Sentence: Overall, it can be seen that the greatest change was in the proportion of energy sources to the oils energy.
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Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to oils and energy
the most high percentage of oil energy
the most highest percentage of oil energy
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oil energy and natural gas had the same decrease
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Overall, it can be seen that the greatest change was in the proportion of energy sources to the oils energy. Therefore, the smallest change was in the percentage of energy sources to the nuclear power and hydroelectric power
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