The two maps below shows road access to a hospital in 2007 and in 2009

The two provided maps depict road access to a hospital in a particular city in 2007 and 2010.
It is noting worthy that six bus stops, which were located along the Hospital Road, had been removed by 2010. After this alteration, two roundabouts were built on crossroads in order to ease the traffic. Furthermore, special area was alloted for construction of bus station to the north of the Hospital Road.
The territory experienced several other considerable changes during three-year period. In 2007, place for parking was dedicated to both staff and public, however, carpark for visitors was transferred to the east to building. Meanwhile, the area for staff transport remained on initial place during this period.
Overall, some visible modifications were added in a road plan of a city hospital such as replacement of parking territory and erection of bus station.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17730496454 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82647026488 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645390070922 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5800658768 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.25 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225744794178 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102580928895 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131824629348 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173088471621 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15759900796 0.0819641961636 192% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.